Black Ghost

I am happy to be here at this forum, since I've been looking for a good writing forum for a few years now. This one looks like a really good ...

Shocking, yes, but magicman has made a transformation ;) BG

It would also solve a great number of problems if everyone did what I said without question. :smt005

Hold up. I'm fairly sure that no one's attempting to attack your faith, spokenfor09. They're simply arguing whether or not the Bible explicitly states that homosexuality is wrong. That doesn't ...

I seem to write for female characters 90% of the time, so this helps ;P. MM

So... Who here is a magician on YWS besides me? And if you are, what do you do? (stage, close-up, etc...) I NEED TO KNOW!!! MM

What you wrote was really heartfelt, Kel. And it is extremely sad that she died, but of course she'll always be remembered for her wonderful contributions to the world of ...

Pretty much anything, but I can *always* count on the likes of Evanescence or Imogen Heap to get me in the right mood. :P MM

I think these tips are rather pointless, because there really is no substitute for actual intelligence. And besides, it sounds as if you're talking to severly mentally retarded people. :? ...

Hi there! Welcome to the site, and I'm glad you decided to post something! :P I'm magicman, obviously, and I'm here to critique. :D Firstly, I see you have a ...

Hehe, making things up as you go isn't a bad way to go, either, but if I work like that I'm bound to head straight into a wall. XD MM

*sighs* I guess now I'll just have to use my good judgement when it comes to deciding which words are bad.[/sarcasm] MM

I thought the pacing was good, actually. But in a couple of parts I noticed there wasn't the "gasp" kind of moment that I think it needed. Let me see...I ...

Hmm...I really don't think that you can be too harsh. I guess saying "find a new hobby" would be out of line, but I'm sure no one's said those exact ...

Go over to my Elements of Plot usergroup. There are topics on different outlining techniques you could use. I'd personally recommend the Snowflake Technique , as its the best for ...